Stepping Into Life---

Have tried something entirely new, one para describes the girl's fear against society and the pain in her heart and the other tells about the guy who has fallen for her..

A step at the floor and it got me thinking …
the words not coming in my mind, my eyes blinking!
Every night looking up at the moonlit sky ...
it’s not within my reach … the up-above highs-

So I move a foot forward but it goes back again ...
in a world of hypocrites ... there is misery and pain!

A step at the floor and I see her,
gliding high with a coat of fur!
Breaking frontiers but always so cold ...
wish if I could take her and behold"
The seasons change , so does time ...
and soon as I knew things began to rhyme!

A step at the floor, that lead me to him ...
it was a glimpse, a hesitant one, like the old gray-colored films!
Reluctant to give a hand but I knew now onward I shall dance ...
for life never has given me a second chance"
Was it all so easy … or made easier by his charm,
for things were in order, for the moment was calm!

A step at the floor, and I learned life ...
for she stands next to me as my beloved life!
The meaning of life without words I know ...
In her silence and darkness a vision grows!
So what if the path is dark ... I'll light it with lamps of hope ...
no more difficulties ... no more challenges to cope!

A step at the floor … and I’ve learned to live,
to forever be there ... to forever give----

Author's Note

Love changes the world---the poetry is trying to dive deep int he hearts of two people, a girl who does ballet and the boy who dances with her...and describes about them and their mutual feelings for each other---the first para is by the girl, next by the boy and vice versa---

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

I believe in your ideas. Keep writing.

[MYSELF]

nice work putting together the thinking of two different persons who are falling in love and thoughts put together. Given a meaning to different perception of writing..
nice work done..appreciable.