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Can't move
Cant speak
Take a peak
At this next life
What's in store
Ask for more
Who knows
He holds the key
I don't know
I can't think

Reviews

[ScottWinchester]

lol Heh... what a sparse poem :) And yet it feels totally kindred, and after reading it I can't help but feel about the same way as the poem describes.

Interesting poem, and that's not a bad thing at all. I liked it. Hope to read more of your work soon.

- SW

[Forgiven]

Thanks.... I appreciate the review!