Eggshells to light

Eggshells to light

A Poem by sweetsweet22
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Walking on eggshells, walking in the dark, not knowing where to go or what to do

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Every step I take there is a crack
I'm walking forward but all is black
I don't know where I am going
I really hate not knowing.

Hoping not to step on the shells
I know if I do, it will lead to hell
Which direction is hard to say
Should I just stop and try to pray?

Hopefully soon the darkness disappears 
Maybe then it will all be clear
Let the light shine, show me the way
I give permission for the sun to ray.

© 2015 sweetsweet22


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Ray as an adjective does not seem to work in the last line. The poem gets the point across but could use some revising.

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Added on December 18, 2015
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