I Wish I Was

This is about a guy who wished to be noticed by the girl whom he loved for a very long time...He wished that someday he can confess about his feeling for her...

I wish I was the sun
That you're sadly stared at
During the sunrise and
Sincerely watched during sunset

I wish I was the wind
That can tightly hugged you
Freely and silently
Wiped your tears away

I wish I was the ocean
A somewhere that you can confess
And a somewhere that you
Can relieved your confusion

I wish I was one of
Your tears that streams
Down on your face and
Die on your lips

I wish I was HIM to have
Strength and courage
To tell you how much
I love you

Author's Note

i'd appreciate your comments.

Reviews

[Nchaks]

What a beautifull poem! I see the painfull feelings in your poem, Keep writing please!

[Sid]

I really liked dis piece a lot ...it stars from d sun den wind nd l8r tear ...
Collecting these things with a nice touch of feelings...

Keep writing..