Unexpected Angel

Being thankful of having someone by your side to lean on.

You came to my life
All of a sudden
An unexpected angel that
Joined me on my loneliness
Became a clown on my sadness
Supports me on every decision I made
Catched and lifted me on my downfall
As he watched and feel proud
When I stand for myself
Fixing the pieces of me
And accepts the challenges
That life offers me

Author's Note

I appreciate to hear your suggestions to improve this one.(^_^)

Reviews

[Nchaks]

good! i like this one too! it is so touching.

[Honeypot]

I think this is great and its one that I can really feel. At first I thought there was some problem with the tenses. Sometimes it seemed you have it past tense and others present. I'm not great at grammar though, and after reading it a second time I understand what you are saying better. I think the emotion behind the poem was wonderful! Its a great feeling to have somebody on your side no matter what. Good Job!