Beautiful Mind.

Poem, about a beautiful mind.

Stop Yourself.

Scream to the wind.

Catch a breath.

Let it all in.

Keep moving.

Don't leave yourself behind.

Never let go.

Don't lose your beautiful mind.

Reviews

[Nat.]

I really like this poem. mostly becasue it's short and beautifuly writen. It keeps you wanting more.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Short and sweet, flows well and tempo is excellent. I think you could add more to this, but its also great the way it is... Awsome job!

[Dilan Gray]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I love it. Great job! Beautiful poem!

[A. M. Hood]

Sydney,
I love your writing.

[Becky Lawrence]

This is a beautiful poem. These are truly words of wisdom :)
Keep writing poems and such, I love reading them! You're a talented person.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

This poem should be read once a day -- at least! Very good advice.

[Arabdha]

short and beautiful..thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to keep the bad stuff out. Like you said in your words. Need to stop and begin again to be able to stay positive. I like the ending to the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Interesting structure , which , though not exactly rhymying , does have a lyrical feel to it . It is very nice how you and it . Good Write .

[trainwreck]

Very nice! I like the two stanza structure; its long enough to tell the story and not so long as to become boring. Great job here.