Radiance

About a beautiful scene

Radiance

At dawn

The sun cascaded pink

Filtered through shadowy branches-

Brilliant to deepest crimson;

Rich against the green of trees

The blue of skies-

The radiance.

Author's Note

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Reviews

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Very short and clear. Words almost like ring like bells at my ears. Very nice and precise work. That's what I feel when I reading it.

[Adam Adams]

yes, i like it.

also, kinda love the way how realistically u capture the reality --- the beauty of nature in words. would be looking forward to reading your poetry.

[Just Kim]

It's very nice, descriptive and wonderful imagery

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Simplistic and rich in imagery. Lovely poem! Welcome to writerscafe. You'll like it here. :)