Let Me

this poem is about a girl filled with so much pain

Let me love

Let me feel 

Let me touch, just one touch

can you give my heart one thump?

i haven't felt,

i haven't loved.

i'm full of hate, that's not enough

i want to run

away from this, the darkness 

feeling nothing, to feel something 

Let me please,

Adore me, and do not leave.

The lonely, yells to me 

that ill never be, 

fully complete 

that my other half will not come, and after the hate ill just be numb. 

Reviews

[Droc]

Caring people should be concerned about you being a mean person. It seems you picked the wrong target! You chose to target yourself, be mean to yourself. Well you moved me! Perhaps you should look in the mirror and blow yourself some kisses? I am not after points or wishing to engage deeply with the social aspect of the site, so no need to respond. This is rare for me. Just keep on writing.

[Syreeta]

thank you very much. I really appreciate this hunny

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow this is beautiful, I love the rythm and flow, make it so much easyer to read.

[Syreeta]

thank you soo much!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

My pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful emotion in your words. I liked the want and the need in the words. Real love will steal away the bad days and replace them with good memories. I like internal thoughts leading to a very good closure. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Syreeta]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.