A long time ago

it explains itself

i remember the detailes like it was yesterday.

the smell of the place,

the words you would say,

 the hurt i would feel,

 even the date of the day

the time.

the pain grew every minuet,

my heart broke a little ever secound

you selfiish hands ripped out everything that i had.

it would take a lifetime to get that happiness back,

so f**k that!

do you have another chance no.

the girl you claimed you loved, YOU killed along time ago 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Xander West]

The raw emotion is very well displayed. I personally enjoy the raw emotions. With a little of bit of polish, your piece could be quite good. I hope to read more.

[Syreeta]

thank you !

[Xander West]

You are quite welcome sweetie.