Moths

When hands breathe and eyes seethe

Lessons learned become lessons served

Velvet touches become acid mouths

Moth wings welcome you with open arms.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The way this is paraphrase...as each line accents the next...keep me reading...the way this transforms from a cocoon...into the after thought in which you use to describe the event one by one...gives much time to look into the balance of everything in only 4 lines of verse...