No hope

In a world so lonely and cold
how does one look for hope
with darkness surronding all the hope in the air
how does it make life fair
for one who is searching for hope
but never finds it

Reviews

[DarkkxVoid]

Finally Someone who agrees with me there is no hope for most of use good write

[Dillon Cotter]

welcome to writerscafe =)
i like your writing, itve short but filled with imagery. nice job.

-will

[cest la vie]

First, this is a very well written piece. Secondly, hope what exactly is that word. I'm sure many of us here have wondered what it is, can you buy it, and why can't we save it up for times of need. I have been at some lowest of the lows before, yet somehow manage to rise. Hope. I really enjoyed this poem.
Lynne

[Tiffany]

Really sad. nice write, t.