Guilty

tighten the handcuffs please

All i see is four

outlines of the same damn thing

im way to fucked up to drive

 my choices were driven by emotions

emotions that i never posess

emotions of built up anger

exploding the top of the bottle

for myself, for you, for the man

now with my mind back on track with sence and reality

i feel stupid

i get flashbacks

of imaginary blood

the man lay broken on my windshield

from power i should never hold

because this power i cant even control

luckily noone actually died

and its just my thoughts f*****g with  my mind

but to me its real

i killed someone tonight

even if he was just imaginary

 

Author's Note

i feel empty death seems so beautiful right now

Reviews

[Kat-Marie Berti]

This is a beautiful poem Siri, I can relate :) I enjoy your flow of words, your imagery and certainly how your set up your poems. Great work

[cfix]

this is intense and so well eapressed. Nicely written!

[Holly]

Now that, is the spirit of youth right there..... ;)

[Keli Renee]

F**k Chills. This had me smiling, in an off sort of way.
The emotion is intense. Had me having my own little flashbacks.
Amazing, dude. Truely.

[O...o]

cool poem, really kind of like deranged scariness cool :)

[black.butterfly]

hmmm
i can relate to the concept of this poem if i imagine myself kiling my annoying high school teacher.
good choice of words, also i feel the emotions expressed in the first 5 lines. good work.

[ebur™]

this poem gave me chills going down my back, but its very good and i loved every bit of it. killing someone imagine-ing-ly [?], that's a great thought to touch upon, i was intrigued by it. amazing poem, great job! :)

[*Evelen*]

Wow great and amazing poem. Can't explain it in words, but it's an awesome poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Que]

Huh, if killing an imaginary person makes one a killer... My oh my, I'm going to Hell! If it exists. Not that I wasn't already going. If it exists. Wouldn't that be interesting...

I liked the poem, is pretty in a twisted kind of way. But twisted is one of my favorite kinds of beauty.

~Que

[Sarah Marie]

i love this poem.
i can't put into words why i like it so much.
all i can say is that it gives me chills.