What You Do For Her

It is amazing how a name can change your point of view. This particular poets name takes her back to a gentler time of new life beginning....

 

 

 

Your name conjures up the most tranquil of feelings

Sending her on a journey to magical times.

Twilight! A sparkling multi coloured vista of

Blue bells under foot.

 

Hands holding hands.

Following a carpet of evergreen

Under comforting canopy of children’s excited voices.

Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze.

 

Rustling, crunching, snapping twigs….

 

A carpet to heavenly blue

Together as a family

That is what your name means to her.

She sees it, she reads it, and she hears it

And immediately she feels happy.

Author's Note

Inspired by Forest Green

Reviews

[J.P.O.et]

This is so beautifull, OMG
'Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze'
Your inspiration is evident in your writing for this is stunning
I am so glad I checked this, cause I woulda missed something
Thank You so much,LLB
J.P.O.et

[the_stoic]

what should i say ... that's what her name does to me ( i am a man ) .. i still her name but turn back to see no one ... your character is lucky is all i can say

[Forest Green]

You've described the place magnificently...'rustling, crunching, snapping twigs...a carpet to heavenly blue, together as a family...'

Beauty and happiness subdued by the somberness of captured moments; providing tranquility when it is most needed.

Wonderful poem...! One of your best!

Daniel

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

an absolute beautiful work of art. i love it. thank you for writing a review for a poem i had written quite a while ago. the woman i was talking about, Jacqueline, is one of them women that i had a hard time getting over, but then i found the woman im planning to marrie, my true love. ever sence then Jacqueline was out of my mind, gone. my new love, Courtney, is my world now. i love her, as some of my other poems say. :D thank you very much for reviewing my poem. your poem that im reviewing on is a very good one. again, i love it. ill be back for more inspiring literature later perhaps.

[R J Askew]

Lovely job. Bluebells are utterly beautiful. They go so well with May time, especially in the woods of English counties like, erm, Sussex?

[Kaitlyn]

I love this poem! It brought back some really great memories that I forgot I had.

Great work!

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

Such a beautiful and poignant write.
Memories are the building blocks of tomorrow, imo.
You've done wonderfully with this write. To me it symbolises the love of what was, with the realisation of needing to move forwards.
Bravo!

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

wow loved the middle. i wish there was a place lke that. i wish i felt that way when i heard someones name.

currently, i hear gunshots and rage. haha. love is a battleground for me.

[forfila]

I love it,, wow, you really wrote this poem well, great ideas, thoughts, meaning and flow.

Much enjoyed =)