Success?

The feeling you get as you pass the finish line,
It is a feeling like no other.
It fills you with pride and accomplishment.
It gives you a sense of worth.
SUCCESS!
You scream with joy.
You glow with pride.
You see your loved ones rush towards you.
They congratulate you and embrace you.
This is the happiest day of your life.
Until you wake up,
And realize it was all a dream.

Reviews

[Rama Masri]

Success is very hard to accomplish but if you accomplish what you love doing in life, then that's really success.o

[Alice Maria]

Thankyou I can't wait to achieve it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Hey!
this is wajiha nayeem the moderator for the contest '' the littlest thing that made you happy''.
And i am really happy and proud to announce you the winner for your write and u win the title ,''the most entertaining''..

[Alice Maria]

Thank you, but isn't the contest still active.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

nah,just because i decided the winners already due to some emergency issues going on...

[writ rajat]

Very nice good picture you draw for poem it depicts the happiest moment can you please write on failing

[Alice Maria]

Thank you so much. I'll try to.😄

[writ rajat]

Welcome you only can do

[matrixmark]

Success is most certainly a satisfying feeling when you accomplish something which you have set your heart on. The feelings you penned are all very true - glow with pride, scream with joy and the adrenaline rush is incredible.

Nice twist at the end.

Mark.

[Alice Maria]

Thankyou very much.

[matrixmark]

You are very welcome


Mark.

[Anjali]

Oh God, I hated the end. But, I know, for sure, that you will gain success, some day. Nice poem, by the way!☺

[Alice Maria]

Thankyou. You are very kind.

[Anjali]

Your very welcome!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice twist....simple and very true. I liked it.

[Alice Maria]

Thankyou vey much.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺