Left Behind

Expressing the lonliness of one who has lost a loved one

You're up there, happy
Dancing down the streets of gold
But you left me here

Reviews

[Trouble]

I like it a lot, well done. Maybe add too it later on, but I like it.

[Taniska 😊€..]

This poem is really sooo short but it shows your feelings about your loved one good job and try to expand your poems . Keep writing (((smiles)))😊😊😊

[Talia M.]

Thanks for your feedback!
It's a haiku, so it is supposed to be short.
I'm not all that good at any other form of poetry!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Ohh sorry I don't know sooo then it's a great poem okk 😋😋😄 smiles