True

Italian Sonnet

My butt is kinda wide
And my waist not that thin
In most competitions I won't win
Sorry to say sometimes I lied
Frequently I laughed but should've cried
Mostly I drown my sorrows with tonic and gin
And yes I have been known to sin
Give me choices and I can't decide

But, this truth I promise you
If ever in a dilemma I got your back
When your depressed I'm here too
When you fall to pieces I'll bring glue
Even if I fall off track
My heart is always true

Author's Note

This is Hallmark rejection cheesy.

Reviews

[Jaclyn]

I don't know what an Italian sonnet entails (sp?), but I don't think sounds Hallmark-y at all. I enjoyed this!

[Greg the Bard]

Thank you my friend for even thinking of me at anytime. Short and sweet but to the point and as for me I stopped competing for love a long time ago. I've found that friendships can and often are just another form of love. Your Friend Gary

[Coromandel]

Well I for one love it, Shows true intent and shows you can take highs and lows, =)

[Chillbear Latrigue]

I like your poem. I don't know anything of sonnets, Italian or otherwise, but I do like the message: we all hate things about ourselves that we can't help, but we are measured by the things that we can...at least I hope that we are.

[Ivory]

This is a really good Sonnet.
True to form and I liked the content of the poem, very sweet.
Good read : )

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely sentiments - nice to know there are some you can always rely on...Thanks for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[Robert Luna]

Very nicely written. I liked the message of a true friend that rings so clear in this piece. More people should be like that.


Great Job!!!!

[Amor-de-angel]

Not sure about sonnets...i don't get them... good work

[Nana Carmine]

wow... I love it. The idea is great. I feel like this all the time. I love it