Wonder

Fleeting thoughts

What do you hide from?
What is your fear?
From where do dreams come?
And why do you feel so near?

I want to see your mind,
To know where I stand.
But I feel so blind,
This is not what I planned.

Reviews

[Dorothy]

Interesting for just a fleeting thought. I like it so far and hope you come back to this! Very vivid images. Nicely written!

[Jaclyn]

You have a lot of fleeting thoughts, don't you? Tee hee! I'll review more when you come back to this...this has potential to be creepy and sad though. Work on it more! :)