Wonder

Wonder

A Poem by Tamme
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Fleeting thoughts

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What do you hide from?
What is your fear?
From where do dreams come?
And why do you feel so near?

I want to see your mind,
To know where I stand.
But I feel so blind,
This is not what I planned.

© 2008 Tamme


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Interesting for just a fleeting thought. I like it so far and hope you come back to this! Very vivid images. Nicely written!

Posted 18 Years Ago


You have a lot of fleeting thoughts, don't you? Tee hee! I'll review more when you come back to this...this has potential to be creepy and sad though. Work on it more! :)

Posted 18 Years Ago



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Added on April 17, 2008

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Tamme
Tamme

Poconos, PA



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