Blackout

Blackout

A Poem by Tamme
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Based on a true story

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The power went out

Before I got to save it

That's how I lost it

© 2008 Tamme


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I second Rain's review. Also, it has a nice rhythmn to it, kind of bouncy - and there's almost imperfect rhyme going on, with the 'out', 'it', 'got' etc.
Nice work.

Posted 17 Years Ago
LOL..Short,consise and clever. I loved it. Rain..

Posted 18 Years Ago

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Added on April 17, 2008

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Tamme
Tamme

Poconos, PA



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