Let My Heart Go

A Poem by Tamme

Let me have a moment to

Explain this

To you.

More tears passed my eyes than

You ever deserved

Hundreds of heated arguments

Exchanging evil glares

Armor for engagement always dorned

Read to battle

To the death... of this relationship.

Get over yourself

Or get lost.

© 2008 Tamme

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Diana Owen Busy with Li..

This is a wonderful acrostics... It is a great style.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Tania Leigh

Awesome acrostic rant, Tamme! Love it!

Posted 17 Years Ago

Emily B

Oh, I like it very much. Gets the point across with style as you call it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Siddartha Beth Pierce

Well said...no need to stay in a place that is that daunting...nice job. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

Posted 18 Years Ago

Amor-de-angel

Without it being an acrostic(and I love them) this is so good.
Great last line!

Posted 18 Years Ago

Captain Blackheart (The..

I like acrosics, I don't really do a lot of them myself (maybe i should) a good write!

Posted 18 Years Ago

desertraven

excellent acrostic! Well done!
Sandra

Posted 18 Years Ago

Nana Carmine

I know the feeling all to well where you want nothing more then to either take you back or let you go. It is a confusing feeling. You did really well expressing it. Great job, I really like it.

~Nana Carmine

Posted 18 Years Ago

Robert Luna

I always like pieces like this. Makes for a fun read and visually pleasing at the same time. It allow a writer to show their creativity even more clearly. The piece itself was an interesting and well written. I like the way you formed this and made it something so alluring and deep.

Well Done!!!!!!!

Posted 18 Years Ago

[TaTo]� The Wolf

WOW..
I love this.
You could kill a guy with this...
LOVE IT.

Posted 18 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Tamme

Poconos, PA

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