Bummer

My coffee is cold

Get a big one I was told

Now it’s gross and old

Author's Note

I like to make my haikus rhyme. This is an exerpt from my Corporate Training Haiku collection. Not really nature based... but lots of fun:)

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

A very clever Haiku!
I also read your post "My Thought" and what a thought!! Impressive!

[Brianna Brie]

Nothing like HOT coffee. Light and playful write.

[Adela Muresan]

:))
I think many can relate to this one.

A.M.

[Wolfwind Words]

Oh dear, Coffee gone to waist! That's a sin! :)
I suppose in the highend fast paced business world. Small coffee would be better, then large coffee. So it can be consumed quickly while on the run.

Now, cold or hot it doens't matter to me. I'll have a 32oz cup of coffee and milk it over the course of 3 hours.

A funny write about coffee!
Nice

Aaron Maycroft

[Lori]

I like your sense of humor. The way you sort of poke fun of haikus and the way they magnify small problems.

[Emily Rose]

HA! That certainly IS a bummer. Very interesting haiku, and fun to read!