Fustration

A brief release.

One deep breath

Quitely

I lose my mind

Others pass by

Clueless

To the chaos

Inside

Silently I beg

An excuse

To set this free

From me

On to you.

 

 

 

Author's Note

It's short, I know...

Reviews

[R E Tree]

This goes straight in to it, its so understandable and I think it is clever

[Sean M. Addams]

short but has alot behind it ... overall very well done.... a very deep piece!!!!!

[Robert Luna]

Oh short but saying so much within it. You tell a story so completely here. I am trap tripping over my own imagination as I have so many thought as to the scene taking place behind these words. Always a pleasure allowing your words to play with my imagination.


Great Job!!!!!!!!

[Emily B]

Brevity is the soul. Days like this we need to pass a little of the chaos on to willing hands. Or a blank page. Whichever we can get hold of. I've found myself here many times.

[Rain]

I'd take this briefness any day. Very powerful. Rain..

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Its perfect , no need more words to express what you fely and I love it :-) .... very powerful writting, I spoecially love :

Others pass by

Clueless

To the chaos

Inside


I know that so much, sometimes I feel I can explode and no one even know it ... thank you Yossi

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

Short never loses a readers interest. I like how this is some what ambiguous, so people will fit it to their own minds... could be interpreted in different ways. Witty and unique.