Seasons

A Poem by Ocean Orchid

Dreams fly ..

Dreams die ..

Summer stain,

Flooding rain,

Spring’s Bliss,

Winter Kiss,

You & me

In our self defined prisons

With hollow rhymes & stagnant reasons.

© 2008 Ocean Orchid

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Lyrical Love

Nicely done, and I like the missing link.
You can't always be so predictable.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seriana

VERY interesting. Huh....I'm with Titus on this, though. I think you should have mentioned autumn somehow.
I really, REALLY loved the last 2 lines. Ouch! But, it was briefly poignant. Nice job!

Posted 17 Years Ago

Titus McGuire

This was a good poem, though I felt autumn should have been mentioned. Still, I liked it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on September 6, 2008
Last Updated on October 9, 2008

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Ocean Orchid

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Poems come in my mind once in a while - it's a kind of momentary breeze , but that very time is precious cause, poetry is precious itself , flickers like a Gleaming Candle in pitch black darkness ... more..