Split

creeeepy

don't listen to her
she's crazy

she's lying
don't listen to her
she's lost

 

and she's hiding

don't listen to her
she's got too much to say
listen to me
the quiet one
i'll stay

 

don't listen to her
she cries in the darkness
listen to me
at least i pretend well

 

listen to me!

 

no, listen to me!

 

don't listen to us
we're dying

 

we're trying!

 

don't listen to us
so caught in the creases
please, listen to us
as we're splitting in pieces

Reviews

[Staci Brown]

trippy! loved this piece! you reach inside the reader and grab their attention nicely, then spook em a bit! :D well done!

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

weird.

interesting.

creepy?

kinda.

i like it.