A Sweet Revenge For a Little Girl

A Sweet Revenge for a Little Girl

A sweet revenge I feel towards you.
The pain I feel will soon be in the sky.
The punishment will be cruel.

A sad little face is black and blue.
The only thing her sweet little eyes do is cry.
I feel a sweet revenge on you.

With all that blood you drew,
You made her die.
The punishment will be cruel.

Now that sweet little angle flew
Up to the beautiful blue sky,
But a sweet revenge will fall on you.

The pain we feel grew
Towards your ugly lies,
But the punishment will be cruel.

Everyone in thought will kill you,
And in hell you will dry.
For a sweet revenge will come and fall on you
Trust me, the punishment will be cruel.

Reviews

[fred...]

This is sad, especaiilly with the child abuse.

[Jess Cook]

This is so sad.

[Wildecat]

Excellent poem, with an excellent message. I disdain abuse of any kind.

[Forest Green]

Haunting poem; there seems to be a lot of sadness and hurt expressed.

Good work...

[Leah]

I really enjoyed this poem. It was simple yet exquisite. I loved the contrast between the innocent little girl and the wretched abuser. Thank you for sharing this piece with the world!

[passion]

That's passionate. It's vivid without being overly graphic. I can definitely appreciate the feelings behind this. I'm glad you invited me to read your writing.