To Be With You

 

Agony engulfs my body

This pain, I’ve never felt

It imprisons me eternally

My dreams appear to befall truth

My joy has drawn closer the end

I’ve awakened into oblivion

You’ve vanished               

The person I desire

I’ve made disappear

Now I sit in this room

Encircled with lust induced creatures

Thinking of ways to run to you

But it seems unattainable

Such task feels out of my hands

But I miss you

It looks as if I can’t go on

Your love is what I need

But how do I do the extraordinary?

My glorious love

How do I go back into your arms?

 

Reviews

[fred...]

Encircled with lust induced creatures

cool reminds me of vampires.

[Jess Cook]

I love the agonizing touch in this poem.

[James Paulin]

Internal agonizing is a realm of its own. It may be expressed in physical terms but with different connotations that are mental and spiritual. I feel this poem would be more significant if it was more dimensional. Go deeper.

[Secondhand Tink]

Ahh I really like this write, very easy to identify with,
You describe the feelings of pain and longing so well.

Excellent write :)