Tragic Pain

 

I try to secure myself on the bottom of the sea.

Where no one can find me.

Where I can finally be kept in peace.

 

I try to surrender the sounds.

But still I hear that brainless hound.

Silence, why can’t you be found.

 

I want to shut the door to my ear.

Then pray that I won’t hear.

The talking is what I fear.

 

I don’t want to listen to your death.

Still I remember your last breath.

Why did you get overtaken by meth?

 

I knew your pain.

I knew you weren’t sane.

I hope its forgiveness you gain.

 

Your emotions weren’t pretend.

I’ll miss you best friend.

I will remember you until the end.

 

A Tragic Pain

Reviews

[James Paulin]

A theme, a melody, a captivation and a timeless dimension. Very nice.

[Tallulah]

this is such an amazingly strong piece. It hold so much emotion and it has a quite elegance to it. Lovely.
I try to secure myself on the bottom of the sea.
Where no one can find me.
Where I can finally be kept in peace.
^ My fave part probably because it explains how Im feelingnow amazingly. Great job.

[Jess Cook]

wow