Two-Liner

You asked me to pick an apple,
I tore down the whole damned tree.

Reviews

[brinkley]

damn to damned?


did you change it for meaning or sound?


I think I liked 'damn' better either way--meaning and sound.


I still like the poem though--it's simple but there's enough emotion that you can make up your own background.

[D. Pesek]

man, I like short stuff like this. this is really good.

[Muhammad]

haha nice!