From Hell

Lyrical about a sad man who sinned his whole life and has reviewed his mistakes.

Feeling the pain drain from my blood stained chains,

Reaping the pasts creeping to my minds inner shames,

Omitting through my brain the distruction of my reins,

Mouthing out the words infecting any tamed,

 

Housing all thoughts of curupted pandora box,

Even to this day holding any seen as lost,

Living without cost the life i wished i crossed,

Learning evermore the damnation i exaust,

 

I can't take the pressure of the path seen as simple,

 

Amazed at the sight of my futuristic limbo,

Dazed to the thought of the goated symbol,

Miserably i wait to the fight towards this figure,

I know not of an escape instead i pursue my inner,

To find the final days pleasant, from the eyes of this sinner...

Author's Note

look down the side

Reviews

[Nina Kari]

Ok I'm like really slow, I didnt get it the first five times. :) Now I get it. And this is really good. What he did in the past doesnt matter what he does in the future to make up for it matters. I do understand where he's coming from, though, but as the fellow reviewers below have stated, we all sin. From what I hear He is a forgiving person.

[Iota]

I am sure he isn't alone for we all have sins mostly hidden but he is facing his and he is feeling through it, he will come to terms with it and soon find forgiveness. of course the question is will he ever forgive himself? I don't know if I believe in absolute right and wrong, for what is right for me is wrong for someone else and so on and on. I like to think of it as cause and affect. Good write I enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Sometime sin is sweeter then the good we can see in this world. Hard to judge the right and wrong decisions we must do. I like this poem. A internal struggle most of us won't know the answer till we face the end. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[MagiCrystal]

A sin is a sin and past mistakes do not meter when the heart is in the right place. It's good to repent and start a new. Being corrupted is a daily living World. Deception is a good way to see life and then.. redemption.
I called it..deception... my own words.. a like your style in this poem..
We all have sin.. not one person is free of sin.. x0x