Greed

I sit amongst a million men,

I hold myself to not one sin,

I think of me and call for help,

To get myself all you've dealt,

Apreciate not what i get,

But instead i get upset,

The next i want is the thing i need,

I want it all unfullfilled.. my greed.

Reviews

[Addie]

Good rhymes. It just needed to be more complex. Aside from that, it's nice =)