Heartbreak

Hey dont go.

I. cant. be alone no more,

Wishes pass but yours not gone,

Hey dont go hey dont go......

 

 

 

Reviews

[chillz]

short and simple great job!

[Paul Okeke]

just like my song. i wrote

[A.Lee]

Excellent job. For such a short poem, you conveyed so much emotion... It's like I could see the scene playing out before me, the pain on your face. Very well written.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this cuts deep, i have watched a few walk away from me. OUCH

[Brad]

simply sadly put...and know how this cuts

[Charles]

Not much to criticize here. The punctuation is interesting and effective. Good work.

[Kes]

This is really nice. Really well expressed for such a short poem.
Pretty perfect.

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...so sad.

[just rose.]

I like this. It's short and sweet and to the point, as if hours of longing and talking come down to this statement - it's really all there is to say.

[Jenny Nelson]

Oh my do I know the feeling. Short, blunt, to the point. Makes the emotion even stronger. Well done.