when i think.

this one hits my heart every time i read it because i've felt this way more then once and i don't know what to do with the feeling

Some how when I think of you I only think of love.
I don’t know what to make of this feeling
I know I can’t be right when I only want you to myself
When I talk to you I can only smile and when I write about you I feel like a dork.
I know I shouldn’t be thinking this way but it’s the only way I know how to think

When I think of you, I only think of us
I don’t know what to think of these thoughts
I know I can’t be right when I can’t let you go
When I hug you all I want to do is hang on for eternity and when I sing along thinking of you I feel like and idiot
I know I shouldn’t be thinking this way but it’s the only way I can think of you.

Now that I think of you I think of forever
I don’t know what to do now that you’re gone
I know I can’t be right when I only want to kiss you
When I tease you I only want to see you smile and when I think about you I feel like a cliché
I know I shouldn’t be thinking this way but I just can’t help myself.

Author's Note

like always ignore grammer, does it seem to fake? because i know that it's not but to you does it seem that way?

Reviews

[Enigma]

Fake??? NO WAY!!
This seems so true. You yourself know that i doesn't sound fake at all.
This is very close to your heart, and I can see why. It's so beautifully crafted, full of all the excitement of teenage romance, the reader can't help but sigh everytime she/he finishes reading it.
A bit of modification and this could also become a very cute song....
It flows very beautifully from word to word, line to line, verse to verse.
Very well done!! Keep writing!! And don't think of your writings as fake....coz' they're not...^_^

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

This is beautiful=) I love the concept=) Lovely flow of words from the heart...so pure and true. I myself can relate. Sweet write=)