the Drum

at a friends house we had a gathering to play music and i wrote this about the drums...I love the drums/congas/bongos...

The Drum beat hits hard

in rhythm with my heart

I breath hard,

In.........................

out...........................

almost breathless.

oh what little control I have over my own exsistance

but my will has it's own persistance,

my soul, with it's resistance,

I'm slowly fading into a Trance.

It's here I lose myself in the music.

Author's Note

ignore grammar. what do you think in general?

Reviews

[James]

Muahhahahaha
This was awesome
I love it, it's almost how I hear and feel music
Awesome write =D