#1

this is the first poem that started a whole little session of poem writing...

I may not have been there in the old days

in the days when you were young

and the days when you were just becoming who God has made you.

But i'm here now and I want to be there as long as possible

And be there until these days, become the old days

When you look at me and say "I've known her for 10 years"

And we start to talk about "that one time" and "do you remember when"

When I become not just you present and future, but your past as well

Don't get me wrong these days are great, just tops!

But I can't wait for the days to come.

Cause as long as I'm with you, my past, present, and future belongs to you.

Author's Note

ignore grammar.

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

AAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
-jealous of how awesomely you write-
I ditto this entire thing.
:]]
loves!

- hershey's kiss

[erased]

It seems simple in the beginning but reaches its true depth in the last line. your sincerity is touching.

They say past cannot be changed, but perspectives can be.... and Love can change almost everything because it is a kind of miracle and not merely an emotion.