#2

I still smell you hours after we've parted

It's an intoxicating smell. it takes me to just hours before

when we were sitting on a couch (it doesn't matter where)

but we sat and held hands there. you put your arm around my shoulders

and I leaned back settling into your warmth.

sometimes we talked, sometimes we just were.

I remember the feel of your hand in mine, i miss it already.

it seems my body no longer belongs to me, but it's yours, yours to hold.

and every moment I'm not in your arm I wish I were.

But I still smell you even hours after we've parted.

It's an inoxicating smell.

Author's Note

ignore grammar.

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

I ditto erased.
100%
even though it makes me jealous.. x]

- hershey's kiss

[erased]

Wow! The very first line is incredibly beautiful and seeped with nostalgia. i love the fluidity and the technique of going backwards in time and consciousness. How in a beautiful subtle way consciousness lingers on to the past moments. My God! I liked this one.