Within

I want to make love to you

Beneath the moon

Beneath the stars

Beside a campfire

Allowing our bodies to consume

The fresh air

From dusk to dawn,

And when all is done

And our bodies are one,

Just lay there

Side by side

In total bliss

Embracing that moment of ecstacy

Within one another

For all eternity.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

Beautiful and from the heart Awesome write

[MOON]

Passionate write.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A passionate, lovely piece. Great write!

[Damien Davison]

It seems you really care for this person, you show the passion in your words... So many love poems, but I do enjoy yours, just straight up love for the girl. Nicely done.