Through And Through

We've had our ups and downs

During our lives

But have pulled through

Some tough times,

I was there for you

You were there for me

I want our life back again

More than you may believe,

I bared my soul

Whole heartedly

And can only hope

You want to give yours back to me,

I gave my love to you

And believe it or not

I still want to

With every part of my being

I want your love, our love

More and more

Through and through.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i know this feeling but never have i known this type of wish to come to fruition. from what i've heard the realization of such a whim can go either very well or terribly wrong. i love the way you put it into prose and made the gesture a real art form instead of just letting it fester within like a sickness. you have given it life and done it very well indeed.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you.

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Such devotion and so full of promise....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Wow i think i know who this one is about :) great write loved it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and you sure do know :)

[Lover Of Words]

indeed i do :)

[DrD]

A nostalgic, almost mournful work, Tarry. The structure and meter is fine and the form is in simple, maximum-two-syllable language that often makes works more readable. I enjoyed this one. Good job.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for your kindness.