A Weaved Spell

You mark across my body

As if you belong

One slash after another

What have I done wrong,

You are deeply embedded

Like a mortal sin

An adulterer, eternally wedded,

Your wounds, a disgrace

Scars left forever

Why must you leave a trace,

I want others to not see

That you have

Such control over me,

You have weaved such a spell

What did I do to deserve this curse

Why could I not foretell?

Reviews

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

excellent write....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pain visits us so often and leaves so many traces that we feel it owns us.

we come under its spell...and expect nothing less and unfortunately, nothing more.

provocative write.

jacob

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Hamza]

actually the best read ever for me ...
that's all i can sum this up in ...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

This is a mesmerizing read, I've had to read it over to get the full flavor and potential of it, you certainly leave it open for interpretation what's cutting into your sanity.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

there is always residual damage and collateral pain when clawing one's way out of such a web of suffering.... the pain over rides the pleasure. nicely written.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much - and you are so right!

[quinfinn]

happy to oblige

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Damien Davison]

Nice write, I could feel the pain, the feeling of being trapped... The title is great, in time he has crafted and built up the spell... Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

It appears you may have to chew your leg off to get out of this trap...
I fine write my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

Great job sounds a little unfinished... Though it does sound like a good start keep going sounds great

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

:)

[DrD]

A strong work revealing self appraisal withoiut assuming the role of victim. I think "you wounds" was meant to be "your wounds" but that's a minor flaw. A very interesting and enjoyable read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much and thank you for catching that :)

[Lover Of Words]

Hey we both wrote about this! I love this! Great emotional peice!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you