The Charmer

I can bring you to your knees

In a good way

By one look into my eyes

I can enrapture your heart

With just one word

Left spinning in your mind,

I can wrap your body

In leather and lace

And you would melt where you stand

Not leaving a trace,

I could capture your spirit

And set your soul free

What do you think

I could possibly be?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your poetry lately. Been a new edge and tone I like. I knew a few charmers in my life. Can lead you to good and bad places. A nice ending. I like poetry with a question at the end. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

No, thank you for leaving your honesty! Very much appreciated. :)

[Rob Santana]

incredible write,haha. lets see a woman or dominatrix hahaha leather and lace right? haha I really ,like your style of writing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much - Can't wait to read some of yours - probably won't be until later on in the evening. Less noise in the evening hours.

[DrD]

My guess is either woman or religion . . . . they both have a lot in common.

[Tarry Franck]

You got it "Woman"!!! You're too good! :)

[Rik B]

your words leave me speechless, if you could do all that i dont think i would care what you would be. great work

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my friend! Been a long time since I've heard from you! Will catch up with you on Facebook soon. :)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

I too am wondering just what the suspense is? Very captivating.

[quinfinn]

oh goody, a riddle! let's see....is it a potato? love? fire? my tailor? hairdresser? oh hell, i give up! nice write!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[quinfinn]

aren't you gonna break the suspense? i have been waiting all day for the solution to the puzzle!!!!!

[David Scott]

Let me ask Bilbo. He would know for sure...
You clever poet.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sooooooo much :)

[Hamza]

salvation ..

and it befits everything ... desperation, love, death, life .. everything ..
a fine piece presented ... beauty of a thought ..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Lover Of Words]

:))I absolutly find this amazing! amazing write my dear aunt

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear niece :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure dear :)

[C.C. Marx]

Chocolate, definitely chocolate :pp. Well written my friend

[Tarry Franck]

Cute - Lol Thank you

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure of course but I have you know chocolate is a sneaky little devil, it calls to me begs me I'm weak lol