Euphoria

The flame flickers

Beneath the moon

With hands as quick as light

The stars shake

Illuminating my soul so bright,

Euphoria spreads through

And all I can think about

Is how I wish

I could share this with you,

We could embrace this moment

Make it our own

Instead of me here

Standing all alone,

But I will do

As you suggested...

Take advantage of this rare beauty

Because within my heart

Your love is truly here with me.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

the mind can bring so much pleasure, especially when one connects it to the heart and releases all borders to accept that very intimate concept. what a wonderful revelation this write is, to know that you are so capable of love unabridged and romantic quest, while deep in your heart there is a lingering wound. beautiful, simply beautiful....i do get you.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and understanding me :)

[quinfinn]

thank you for sharing....ditto

[Leigh]

You have set an incredible scene with this, the euphoric feeling you have creates a link to your love

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Aya]

beautiful tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[rnuff]

This is so heartfelt, nicely expressed and written

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the word "Euphoria". The description was strong. Leading the reader on a journey into wish and desire. I like the flow of the thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Coyote :)

[Margarette]

I like how this is written with passion and honesty enveloping the character's lonely state. I hope that person will finally have someone by his/her side. Beautifully-crafted work!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much.

[Lover Of Words]

This is quite a great poem...

Take advantage of this rare beauty
Because within my heart
Your love is truly here with me.
this is just beautiful...

And so are you :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Simply beautiful and so romantic. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

I am not sure this is euphoric. Still my heart felt your perfect beauty as seem thru the eyes of your lover.
"But I will do
As you suggested..."
Indeed you have.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Tarry Franck]

Now that is so Euphoria, lovely done Tarry, with little words describing that exact feeling.

E.L.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :)

My pleasure Tarry always :)