Rise Of The Phoenix

The wild heart 

Hidden by society

~~A disguise~~

Linked to others

By streams of feelings

The truth

~~Realized~~

Attached

To passion flames

Tangled in lust

~~Terrorized~~

Through the deep ashes

A Phoenix

~~I rise~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. The poem tell the story of many. We learn by disappointment and sadness to lose our kindness. Which is very sad. I like the reason for the poem. The Rise of Phoenix can bring the Devils to the front. Would be a better world if we look for the dove of peace instead of disappointment. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Leigh]

Very interesting to think of yourself or someone in this way, I like the way you are hidden to society and secretly something else. I am impressed how you have got your concept across with so few words.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Intriguing....always loved the myth of the Phoenix.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and I love it too.

[David Scott]

We all can rise. What is it that brings one to flight out of the ashes and leaves the other to burn and add to the ashes...
A very fine poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

I love it, this is your finest hour. Love it, can't say more.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

:-)

[quinfinn]

this is the finest piece you have ever penned, in my opinion. out freekin standing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you soooo much :) I wrote this one years ago!

[quinfinn]

;)

[Lucien Maier]

nice formatting. the piece flows well

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[MOON]

Deep write . Lovely

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

ooooooh i like it!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

This is amazing!! wow no words just amazing :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much!

[Lover Of Words]

You are very welcome :)))