Sweet Surrender

Haven't heard from you

In so many days

I'm beginning to wonder

If I was just a phase,

Maybe you were not

Getting the attention

You needed

Maybe you felt

The need for greed,

One was not enough

So you reached out

For another,

You knew I would fall

Drop everything

At your beck and call,

And the sad thing is

That I love you so

I would do it all over again

Anything to see you face to face

To feel your embrace

And to leave you with my trace.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

Even when I read these prior too them being posted and i come back and read them here im am still in awe! Nicely done my aunt LOVE YOU!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much and I love you too

[Frieda P]

Like romancing the devil...just the other side of pain. Good one.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I can feel of the emotion and strength of feeling in this heartfelt poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear