Sinful Dose

You delivered a dose of me

Right in my face

Couldn't believe what you said

It was such a disgrace,

After all I've done for you

Getting you out in the world

You were such a bore

Yet u have the nerve to call me a w***e,

And I thought you to be a friend

Was I ever wrong

I know you were less than that

You disguised it quite well

And I know now

To better trust the ones

That surround me,

For you carry a meaningless soul

And next time I will win

I will be able to see right through

The next one that approaches

If they carry with them

A tongue of sin.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Whoa!! This one wakes you up and throws your a*s overboard! This is great, full of moxy and strength.....love it from the first lines.

You delivered a dose of me
Right in my face

Don't you hate when that happens? Kudos, short and tart and to the point!

[Tarry Franck]

Frieda - glad you liked this. :)

[beautiful dreamer]

awesome poem!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Leigh]

Twisted sinful bitter erotica, that is open, honest and raw, keep your eyes shut though

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest tone of the poem. Bad people will show their real face sooner or later. I like the story in the poem and the strong ending. We learn by trial and error. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the wonderful review :)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Wow! There's a few people I'd liked to tell this one too.....great job...lot's of emotion...nn

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and do so if need be ;)

[Ohhhwillow]

It takes time to become a good judge of character, some of us are better at it than others, I know I personally am far too accepting and it can be a great pain in the a*s when you get screwed over! Anyway, this was a really great piece, full of thought and rich in honesty

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Willow :)

[quinfinn]

if someone calls me a w***e they had better be able to prove it...or else i will use my wit to expose their sluttiness. well written and wonderfully expressed!

[Tarry Franck]

I hear what you're saying but this was a man ;) and thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

Well this one packs a powerful punch of sinfulness... Its seems as though it is writen for someone. I like the last line alot... But this whole poem is very good and once again i am in pure awe of the wonderful words you produce..

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks sweetie - This was one that just flowed right out of the pen. Love when those moments happen.

[Lover Of Words]

Yes so do i!