Blossomed

I cast my heart into the sky

Wondering what may fall

Laughter, tears

Thunder, lightning

Or nothing at all,

I cast my soul

Upon the ground

Wondering if what looked like weeds

~~Bloom~~

To my surprise my heart shed tears

On my souls weeds

And blossomed, beautifully indeed

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done tarry!

[Ohhhwillow]

Great pathetic fallacy here, really hits home, I suppose they call it a leap of faith for a reason friend!

[Tarry Franck]

I couldn't agree more :) Thank you

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

One can only hope for something good when we put our hearts out there. Well said.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Renée]

Lovely work ! I was always of the mind..weeds were only unwanted flowers...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear.

[Renée]

a pleasure

[quinfinn]

you never know what might happen, should you decide to let those "soul weeds" bloom. maybe you should nurture those blooms and make them flourish. before you know it you may have a garden full of beautiful flowers. awesome piece, Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for this beautiful review

[quinfinn]

inspired by beauty...who knew?

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[Lover Of Words]

Beautiful

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

your welcome!

[khalid]

very nicely penned..although it has a big deal of feelings of disappointment, but you have really penned it so well..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you khalid

[khalid]

my pleasure..

[Frieda P]

Poignant read, I love this one...

'on my souls weeds' !!

You have blossomed within this piece...kudos Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was mine Tarry ;-)