One More Moment

Is it crazy of me

To place my knees to the ground

Wondering if the flowers 

Will still bloom

Through the surrounding

Reach for a cold, pale hand

They may believe I am

Disturbed, doomed

Am I?

Just because I want

To raise a dear friend

To have one more moment

One more kiss, one more hug

To be alone with her again.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

You're not love. This is beautiful and breathtaking. I'm so sorry about your partner dear. I think it's sweet that you got matching tattoos and actually managed to stay together. It's a little funny because as soon as I saw that picture I thought it would make a gorgeous tattoo, and here you've already done that. Gorgeous write :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Lina Grey]

you're welcome :)

[beautiful dreamer]

wo tarry this is awesome

[Ohhhwillow]

You say so much in so little. I can't even begin to imagine how hard it is to loose the love of your life. I'm so so sorry. This is very lovely however, and she would be proud, no doubt about that.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Renée]

I am so tickled to be able to read your work ! Another Great piece of work ! love the knot..Celtic ?

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks - this was about my partner that passed away in 2008 and her and I received the same tattoo. Mine was green and hers was purple. Thought it would be a nice gesture due to the Irish in us. Thanks again.

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, Celtic Knot

[Renée]

( : I have that knot in earrings.. I am so sorry to hear about your partner .. Your poem is lovely..and I am honored that shared who inspired your heart...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much - it was an honor to have her in my life as long as I did

[Renée]

( :

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Pure beauty. Who wouldn't want one last moment?

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[quinfinn]

it's not crazy, and you are certainly not doomed. share all the love you can and hope it is returned in kind. there is no emptiness in that. there is much treasure in this write. you have hit the motherlode......well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for your kindness

[quinfinn]

always, Tarry

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[Lover Of Words]

This is pure beauty lovely job but you are not doomed my dear

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure how crazy that is, but this is batshyte crazy good. A few simple lines and you've given an entire scenario...doomed? No, you are not, keep writing like this and you'll keep blooming for sure.

[Tarry Franck]

Frieda your the best - thank you so much.

[Frieda P]

Woo, you made my day! My pleasure to read you always dear friend.

[Tarry Franck]

That pleases more than you'll ever know.

[Frieda P]

:-D