Lost Lover

My lover, my friend

Why can't I find you 

Where have you been,

I'm lost without you by my side

I'm sad, frightened for my life,

You gave me comfort

Now you are gone

How in my life

Am I supposed to carry on,

You were a good person to me

With some bad traits

But aren't we all full of aint's,

I've lost u

I've lost a lot

But I will refrain

From losing myself

Again and Again.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

when we lose ourselves in a another soul, we become so immersed within that passion and obsession that we literally cast fate to the wind and find our own awareness of self dwindling...until we have no identity, save the identity we feel vicariously through the object of our affection. it is an affliction, yet a blessing to know this kind of love. it is important to maintain self in these matters of the heart. you have brought this malady to light beautifully in this gorgeous write.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - you have such a beautiful way with words. Thank you so much :)

[Renée]

Desperation & sadness...the last lines touch me deeply ..we do sometimes do that to ourselves.... beautifully written

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Renée]

my pleasure

[Ethale Captor]

Amazing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[Ethale Captor]

It was not a problem.

[luviva]

well, we all sometimes feel lost when we loose someone dear to us and so close.
what i didnt really get was the connection that you had with the lost lover!
other than that, fantastic write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

This sounded like a desperation to hold onto something! Good thoughts!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. I could feel the desperation in the words. We do miss the kind and gentle people in our life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Coyote

[Frieda P]

Been there, done that...so glad you ended on a high note...never losing yourself. Relatable, sad, yet hopeful, good one Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda

[MOON]

Poignant write loosing special people.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the review

[Holly Mason]

lost ...and yes we are all full of aint's
very lovely except
thank you for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

This is pure beauty beyond words!!!!! I am in love with this!!! just purely breath taking!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks dear

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)