Free From You

Love is blind

Or am I just being foolish

We've known each other

For a long time

But I can't take the drama, the crime

That you've put my hearth through

I care about you

I feel to do what is right

Which is to walk away this very night,

No goodbyes

Just see you later

Deal with that and be peaceful

Instead of vengeful and a hater,

We've been through a lot

But it has to stop

I can no longer deal

With these vengeful plots.

Reviews

[Renée]

Love is blind or is love forgiving to a fault...your write is clear & reflects a very mature attitude in dealing with a difficult situation.. I think most can relate or learn from this example you share in your poem... Well Done as always !

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Renée]

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[Ethale Captor]

Excellent write, full of emotion. Well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Sir Joseph]

That is the hardest stand to make and I applaud you for doing so

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Frieda P]

You tell him! Powerful emotions in this read....vengeful plots are no fun, and we waste our time and energy, not to mention these kind of people drive us insane!

[Tarry Franck]

You got that right - thank you

[marie]

reminds me of someone dear... thank you for sharing this, it is lovely

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :) Glad you could relate.

[marie]

:)

[Holly Mason]

very emotional this feels like a piece of you is there with your words
thank you so much for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

the end of a dream can also be the end of a nightmare. awesome piece, and...congratulations on your independence.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

smiles and hugs

[Tarry Franck]

:-) {{{embraces}}}

[quinfinn]

warmly received

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

So full of emotion!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Ahhh i love this but walking away is sometimes best! Love this

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks and yes it is

[Lover Of Words]

:)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Sometimes walking away is actually the braver and compassionate thing, we have to think long-term in those moments. Wonderfully realistic write.

[Tarry Franck]

so true - thank you for the review.