Pure Bliss

I dance to the beat

Of your heart

I twirl to the sound

Of your soul

My feet are lifted

Above the ground

Just from the pure passion

Within you I have found,

I could never deny what I feel

Do you feel it too

When I'm around you,

I feel it's pure bliss

Sealed with a poetic

And passionate kiss.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

What a romantic beautiful poem!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Sir Joseph]

Yet another beautiful poem!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Renée]

makes me want to twirl .. again lovely ( :

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Upbeat and lively piece, felt the positive flow of the words. Great penned!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Carissa Marie]

Aww that's so sweet. I love it! :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Such romantic feelings. Hope it goes well for you! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Ahmad Cox]

Very romantic and loving as well. I really liked this one. It showed your more romantic and sensitive side.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Ahmad

[Frieda P]

Lots of passion in your last few reads, someone's in lust/love! Nice....I love

'poetic and passionate kiss'!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[quinfinn]

your poetry gets better with every read, either you have been saving the best for last or your writing skills are expanding. awesome write!

[Tarry Franck]

The latest 3 have been written in the past 2 days. So my skills must be expanding bec/I've not looked at my old writings in ages. But thank you for the wonderful review.

[beautiful dreamer]

lovely poem miss tarry! loved it :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome :)