Whirlwind

Your eyes sparkle

Beneath the moonlit sky

Your skin glows

Before my very own eyes,

You light the night

With such grace

I cherish your every move

Your enchanting embrace,

Never wanting the night to end

As I'm engulfed

By your enrapturing whirlwind.

Reviews

[Jayden Ireton]

The picture sums up the poem perfectly. I love this short and sweet piece on love. "You light the night" is a very powerful sentence.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry is amazing. Good to be engulfed in love. I like the description in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much!

[icelandicblue]

This is really beautiful. You've filled your poem with romantic sentiment.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Very romantic and passionate! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow sexy as the story progress :) it is few words but resonates BOOM!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow again with the beauty!!... Again with the amazement!!!! This is i dont even know what to say you always come up with unbelievable beautiful words!!!!!... You are a never ending great poet my aunt

[Tarry Franck]

I can't thank you enough :))))

[Lover Of Words]

Your words are endless....powerful and true... You have an amazing skill... It shines though every piece

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you soooooo much :)

[Lover Of Words]

You are more then welcome! :)