'Til Its Gone

The loving hours spent together

Why did they have to tether

There were such great moments

The nights camping in the woods

Sure we had our moments of sadness

But most of the time they were good,

You made those moments joyous

With your quick witted ways

I will always love you for that

For your wit, your love, that pulled me through

Some difficult days.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

so many times i have lamented the passing of such things and remembered the good above all other memories..as it is so much sweeter to remember things that way. this write is gorgeous, Tarry. you do know how to touch me where it hurts and brings pleasure at the same time. well done, sweetie!

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - thank you so much Quin - I love your reviews!

[quinfinn]

glad someone does, thank you

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Such sweet words. I'm glad you have this kind of love. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Jayden Ireton]

This reminds me how brief things of life can be. Great poem. It is short and sweet and to the point.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

you made those moments joyous
with your quick witted ways -- I love these lines.

I find that a quick wit and an open heart are the best assests in a relationship; well, in life in general. You must open your heart in order to recieve the gifts of the universe, but you must have the witt to laugh about misfortune lest you go crazy. Well written, my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Lover Of Words]

The poem goddess has returned my dear aunt... This is magnificent

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)