Wonder Of Love

The flesh on my bones

You ripped to pieces

When you left me all alone,

Not quite sure why you had to

Thought what was between us was very strong

I guess our time to end was due

Where did we go wrong,

Still I worry and wonder each day

The reason

The reason you stray

Did I mislead you

In any way,

My recollection of what may be

Is so heartfelt

But unfortunately a sentence of loneliness

I fear I have been dealt

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem about love. I will never understand how someone can hurt someone they love. Love can twist us up and leave us confused. I like the real life ending. We accept things without a fight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Leigh]

It is a wonder and keeps everyone wondering, I get the title now. This is sad and expresses the down side of relationships very well and has made me think that each individual pairing can have multiple outcomes, none of which are predictable.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[OBWhiteHawk]

Ahhh that sucks. Great expressions of pain here. By the title I thought it was gonna be sweet and mushy. Maybe it's meant to be ironic? I guess the wonder of love is that it can feel so good and hurt so bad.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[PurpleQuartz]

A very heartfelt poem.
100/100

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you PurpleQuartz

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Awesome :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my new friend :)

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

Wow! The title was not what I expected! Thought it would be about love but the twist was awesome! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Woah, what a beginning, it only had to get better from there, love hurts, this proves it, thanks for sharing this one Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Frieda

[Sami Khalil]

"In any way,
My recollection of what may be
Is so heartfelt
But unfortunately a sentence of loneliness
I fear I have been dealt"
A very nice poem and those are my favorite lines...Well penned...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Lover Of Words]

This is amazing.. You have opened my eyes in so many ways in the ways of your words... Amazing job my dear

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

your welcome

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks for using my idea for the title i gave you :)

[Tarry Franck]

Very much appreciated

[Lover Of Words]

Very welcome